This is a brilliant suspense story! The tension builds perfectly as Melanie’s paranoia escalates, leading her — and us — down a path of questions about her own mind and safety. The reveal about carbon dioxide poisoning is unexpected yet plausible, adding an eerie layer that’s grounded in reality. Ron’s concern and eventual support provide a warm, stabilizing influence, which rounds out the story beautifully.
Your use of sensory details, like the smell of burning toast or the creak of an old apartment, really pulls readers into Melanie’s deteriorating world. The way you weave in her fascination with true crime as a potential factor in her confusion is a clever touch, and the notes turning out to be her own under the effects of CO2 deprivation is the perfect twist.
The additional story teaser at the end for Trent’s story is intriguing too! It would draw readers into another layer of mystery. This story really nails the suspense while maintaining a sympathetic, relatable protagonist.
«Wonderful act by dad!» The man’s body was covered with tattoos, but he removed them for the sake of his daughter
«From a monster to a handsome man!»
Famous Australian blogger Ethan Modboy Bramble surprised his fans when he covered his entire body with tattoos. The 24-year-old is impossible to miss due to the fact that 95% of his body is covered in tattoos, he has a cut tongue, cropped ears, black eyelids, flared nostrils, a sewn-in belly button and black eyeballs.
When we look at this man, it immediately seems to us that he will not stop doing plastic surgery to make changes to his body. But fortunately, he changed his mind when his daughter was born into his family.
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After the birth of his baby, he made a serious decision to do everything to bring his body as close as possible to its natural appearance. Despite the fact that all the experiments were expensive and caused him pain, he still decided to remove the tattoos.
Now a famous blogger undergoes procedures to look like a normal person. Every day brighter spots appear on his body. The young father showed what he looked like before and now.
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